tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9939966.post2422787366542470531..comments2024-03-28T14:16:51.745+05:30Comments on Known Turf: Short, and bittersweet.Annie Zaidihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08687223598027157611noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9939966.post-77988228615658036152012-08-03T10:35:13.221+05:302012-08-03T10:35:13.221+05:30I tracked this little late, but Good one. You can ...I tracked this little late, but Good one. You can make a 3 hour feature film. I keep reading you, there is lot of stuff, which can be converted into any art film.हिन्दीवाणीhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07941990914773155980noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9939966.post-64305463906814729162012-07-25T21:44:54.645+05:302012-07-25T21:44:54.645+05:30Your characters sound so true to life and the dial...Your characters sound so true to life and the dialogue is fast paced in terms of shifts in tenor - as it should be to have an impact in a short film. The earlier comment is probably right about interleaving dialogue and needing more emphasis on visuals.<br /><br />After our exchange about the new work you are doing I came over to look for example of the same and am so pleased to see this. Very mridulahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16727989308756612666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9939966.post-3973754013938826982012-06-13T10:14:08.409+05:302012-06-13T10:14:08.409+05:30thanks batul and muzzamil.
zack, you are probably...thanks batul and muzzamil. <br />zack, you are probably right. words continue to matter to me most, though i am writing in another medium. perhaps a mental shift will happen after i've tried doing more of this. and thanks for the feedback.<br />AnnieAnnie Zaidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08687223598027157611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9939966.post-30622584889903660002012-06-10T23:39:54.084+05:302012-06-10T23:39:54.084+05:30Ambitious!
Good example of what's clear on the...Ambitious!<br />Good example of what's clear on the page, not necessarily so smooth on the screen.<br />Wish I could give you constructive feedback -- i.e. a proposed solution -- but I can only observe that the inter-cutting undercut the feeling. There's a way to do inter-cutting in which you sustain and even build emotion (the murders in Coppola's Godfather come to mind), but it'BombayZackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17319412617778463441noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9939966.post-63497089602676178522012-06-08T22:49:15.800+05:302012-06-08T22:49:15.800+05:30Nice film. Enjoyed the characters and the your pre...Nice film. Enjoyed the characters and the your presentation. Keep it up!!!Muzammil Karimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04317436849955678086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9939966.post-81181575689780729762012-06-08T10:57:14.346+05:302012-06-08T10:57:14.346+05:30Annie, I really enjoyed the film. Very bittersweet...Annie, I really enjoyed the film. Very bittersweet. I loved Trishlaa's sexuality. Also, your preoccupation with auto-rickshaws. Just one place where I saw a minor hitch is in the sound mix during the auto chase scene. It's too loud.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com